Reminder:

The writing on this blog is from teens who are in a lockdown facility called O&A. O&A stands for Observation and Assessment, a 45-day period ordered by the courts where their behaviors, attitudes, and skills are charted for their juvenile judge.

Thursday, July 28, 2011

Class Poetry: "Take a Look and Tell Me"

Take a look and tell me, what you see in me, this is what I see
A gang member who's trying to find her way out. 
Pushin her way through the dark clouds
hoping one day she will find the light
that everyone says is so bright.
Im going to make it cuz I told god I would
change my ways for my daughter, my father,
and my family. They believe in me they never let me fall.
But that one guy that threw me to the wall. he always
let me fall always had to hit always had to fight he 
turned my life to the blackest of night. 
MS, age  16

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Take a look and tell me, what you see in me, this is what I see
A young man stuck in DT
with no place to be
with all the troubles he may see
waiting for his court date to see 
if he'll be free
RE, age 16

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Take a look and tell me, what you see in me, this is what I see
A big black hole swallowing everything in sight of me.
Then I see a bit of crap that I let dwell
deep inside getting shoved back while
Everything keeps piling on top of me an
there is greatness locked in a chest
titled DO NOT OPEN ME. So I am forever
searching for that key and with help from
few I can be just like you.
SN, age 17

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Take a look and tell me, what you see in me, this is what I see
I see kid that now has bin lock 
up for a min but now I em in it to 
wen it. I cant wate to get out of here
so I can go live with no fear. I em going to 
stear in the clear and be good.
MN, age 15

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Take a look and tell me, what you see in me, this is what I see
A kid who doesn't like being in this facility
but has an opportunity to change his life
so i can be out and have kids and a wife
but first i must change my ways
to be happy and enjoy the rest of my days.
AR, age 17

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Take a look and tell me, what you see in me, this is what I see
Im sorry for what I did if I could
change it you no I would. But I 
can't and I no I should. If you 
could would you pleez help me.
I found my way to seccess and these 
words are true. Being locked up isitent the way 
I want to go and now I no what I want in my life.
FC, age 13



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