Reminder:

The writing on this blog is from teens who are in a lockdown facility called O&A. O&A stands for Observation and Assessment, a 45-day period ordered by the courts where their behaviors, attitudes, and skills are charted for their juvenile judge.

Sunday, March 18, 2012

Class Poetry: "Take a Look and Tell Me"

Take a look and tell me,
what you see in me,
this is what I see
i see a kid wanning to get
out of here and make a change
for that he can make it thru
life. And be able to have a good
life for the future.


AM, age 15


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Take a look and tell me,
what you see in me,
this is what I see


I want to be free
I see myself free thats how
I want it to be but life
has a fee that you have
to pay if you want to be free.


TL, age 15


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Take a look and tell me,
what you see in me,
this is what I see


that I see that people are deing
good in here Im working so hard in here
where i can go home and do good in the 
outs.


ZR, age 17


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Take a look and tell me,
what you see in me,
this is what I see

am I crazy
cuz this is what I see 
A little boy affrade of hi
own toys becase of the other
boys smoking him around
telling him hes worthless as
he starts to frown by 
he gets up he cocks his fist
back and bops that little
hood rat in the nose as
every one heard a loud pop
the boy hit the growned starting
to cry the other boy had
a tast of power conseling inside
to take anyone who gets to him.


KS, age 17


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Take a look and tell me,
what you see in me,
this is what I see


I'm the little girl. When I was 5
years old, my mom always told me
happyness was the key to life.
When I went to school we had to do 
on assignment what we wanted to be when I grew 
up. I wrote down "happy" they told me 
I don't understand the assignment & I told 
them that they didn't understand life. 


CU, age 12


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Take a look and tell me,
what you see in me,
this is what I see


I see a beautiful young lady.
A young lady trying to find her way back home.
A young lady happy to be alive.
A young lady trying to survive. 


ST, age 116


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Take a look and tell me,
what you see in me,
this is what I see

Mirror mirror on the wall
Take a look and tell me
what you see in me
Is it good or is it scary
When I look into the mirror
This is what I see 
A man trying to change
Being the best I can be. 


AW, age 16


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Take a look and tell me,
what you see in me,
this is what I see


A kid who likes poetry.
A kid that also loves to party.
I am the one dancing on the table.
It makes it easier to see
The life of poetry
Brings out the man in me
So next time you think your tough
or the next time you think your bough
just right some poetry
and you will be surrounded by your friend
and not your worst enemy
that is lurking inside of the
Then when you realize you like it.
You will write and write.
Untill there is a dark gloomy night
and no one is in sight. 




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Take a look and tell me,
what you see in me,
this is what I see


I see a boy that is hard on the outside.
but when you go inside he is small and defenceless like a baby.
But can become a monster if any thing happens
to someone or something he loves
So if you be good and don't hert his feelings he
will be an angel from above. 


CW, age 13




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Take a look and tell me,
what you see in me,
this is what I see


That my thoughts and feelings
is to be free. I'm in my 
room every single day bored
and frustrated Oh you show me
what to do I'm confused
and irritated. What should I do 
I'm filled up with all this frustration. Please help I need
some concentration.


HM, age 15


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Take a look and tell me,
what you see in me,
this is what I see

a meanly beast that feasts
on some heast. I cook meat
in heat or else I turn green 
like a bean but I am red 
hot so mean but aggresive. 


RD, age 14









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